• Suggestions to improve sentence structure

• Synonyms to replace repetitive words that occur in proximity

• Alternative word choice for clarity

• Homophones and homographs

• Consistent spelling of character names, locations, etc.

• Consistency in character traits

• Accurate descriptions of actual events

• Consistency with previous books in a series (only if I’ve edited the previous books)

• Actions that have already taken place (e.g., same character stands up twice without sitting down in between)

• Capitalization of brand names, nicknames, titles, organizations, etc.

• Missing words that result in incomplete sentences

• Consistent use of tenses

• Chosen style guide (e.g., CMOS)

• Author's style

• Pace, rhythm and flow of scenes as expressed in sentences

• Syntax

• Spelling

• Grammar

• Punctuation

• Formatting

Fiction and non-fiction edits will focus on the following:

Style Guide. The Chicago Manual of Style is the preferred source for fiction and nonfiction. I will follow the recommendations from CMOS, while ensuring your (the author’s) style is given strong consideration. If you prefer an alternative style guide, please inform me and I will be glad to accommodate your preference.

Dictionary. Merriam-Webster’s Collegiate Dictionary is a common reference for fiction and nonfiction. Let me know if you prefer a different dictionary as a reference for your manuscript.

Style Sheet. If desired, I can provide a Style Sheet that details formatting and other stylistic elements pertinent to your work. The Style Sheet offers an accessible reference to ensure consistency throughout your manuscript.